Writing Task 1: The Basics
Step 4: Rewrite the story from Step 3, but add ADJECTIVES & ADVERBS to make the story more interesting. Have fun with the adjectives and adverbs. Be creative!
(See p 10-13 in the BASICs Handout.)
Title: My name is Alice. I am from Japan. I want to speak English very well, because I like to go to trip. When I was in high school student, I decided on my plan to go to the U.S. I came to the United States in September 18 by myself. I landed in Seattle airport ( Tacoma ), and then I stayed in Seattle for a night. As soon as I met a guy in the airport, I had good time with him. His name is Ryan, and he was also going to Portland. Ryan and I came to Portland by car. It is about 200 miles from Seattle, so we talked a lot to each other. Ryan is from Saudi Arabia. Ryan wants to speak English too. I do not know about his culture, and he also do not know about my curture . We are really interested about each other's culture.In the future, I want to be flight attendant, and he wants to be a tour guide.I often asked him to come in for a chat.After than we know more about each other,so we become the best friend. We both think English is very important for a good job,because now many countries constitute English to become their second language.Learning English very well is not only you can go everywhere easy but also get better chances in your job. If you're looking for a job that can
provide you a good position and a higher salary, understanding Englishoften makes it a lot easier. In many big companies, you'll have a lotof opportunities to establish contact with foreigners may have a
lot of appointments or meetings with them. If you wanna make a good living ,it can't be denied that. So we studies English very hard to realize our goal.We usually went to library,and help each other to slove the English problems.Two years later,we both finished our school,and then we came back our countries.We have a successful start in our careers.we all adore our work passionately and have determination and willpower to persist in the things we are doing.
Step 4: Rewrite the story from Step 3, but add ADJECTIVES & ADVERBS to make the story more interesting. Have fun with the adjectives and adverbs. Be creative!
(See p 10-13 in the BASICs Handout.)
Title:
My name is Alice. I am from Japan. I want to speak English very well, because I like to go to trip. When I was in high school student, I decided on my plan to go to the U.S. I came to the United States in September 18 by myself. I landed in Seattle airport ( Tacoma ), and then I stayed in Seattle for a night. As soon as I met a guy in the airport, I had good time with him. His name is Ryan, and he was also going to Portland. Ryan and I came to Portland by car. It is about 200 miles from Seattle, so we talked a lot to each other. Ryan is from Saudi Arabia. Ryan wants to speak English too. I do not know about his culture, and he also do not know about my curture . We are really interested about each other's culture.In the future, I want to be flight attendant, and he wants to be a tour guide.I often asked him to come in for a chat.After than we know more about each other,so we become the best friend. We both think English is very important for a good job,because now many countries constitute English to become their second language.Learning English very well is not only you can go everywhere easy but also get better chances in your job. If you're looking for a job that can
provide you a good position and a higher salary, understanding Englishoften makes it a lot easier. In many big companies, you'll have a lotof opportunities to establish contact with foreigners may have a
lot of appointments or meetings with them. If you wanna make a good living ,it can't be denied that.
So we studies English very hard to realize our goal.We usually went to library,and help each other to slove the English problems.Two years later,we both finished our school,and then we came back our countries.We have a successful start in our careers.we all adore our work passionately and have determination and willpower to persist in the things we are doing.